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Author Challenge 29 : Mom's the word

 

by Diane Quinn

The loud buzzing sound that unlocked the heavy door welcomed me into the other worldly place that my mother now called home.   On this sunny morning, the day room inside the Alzheimer’...More>
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Mothers in the spotlight


photo by Lars Plougmann

Mothers.

They come in all shapes and sizes, in all temperments and attitudes, with desires all their own and wishes for the world. They may be human and non-human, too. They can be warm as sunshine and as cold as ice, as soft as silk and as hard as stone, as delicate as a flower and as tough as nails. Mothers can be loving and giving or critical and selfish. Some are cuddlers and some are coddlers. Some push you to be the best you can be and some just push you over the edge. Some are quiet and love unconditionally and others are domineering and show their displeasure when you don’t live up to her ideal.

We all have a mother and some have more than one. There are open adoptions now so kids could have two mothers and then there’s the foster mom and the daycare worker who acts like mommy to a dozen kids at a time. There’s the grandmother or aunt who took over mom duties when the “real” mother no longer could for whatever reason. There’s the big sister or cousin who always acted like a bossy mother. There’s the motherly lady down the street who always had time for a bit of tea and sympathy and maybe even a home-baked cookie for a “lost lamb”.

Yes, mothers are human with all the frailties of humans. We love them, we revere them, we cherish them. We miss them when they go away. We step away when they start to smother us and we go to them when all else fails.  We revile them too. We may even hate them, but still they are our mothers and so…Mom’s the word.

In Author Challenge 29: Mom’s the word…and mother, mum, mama, madre, mommy and ma. The entry can be fiction or non-fiction, fact based or fantasy. It can be based on the best mother you’ve ever know or the one who ruined your life. You can tell us how to be a good mother, how to become one or how to avoid becoming one. As always, your imagination is the limit.

  • ·         Ah yes, word limit is upped a bit to 600 words ~650 by Helium’s faulty count.
  • ·         Alistair, the winner of the last challenge, needs to provide the two required words. This is what he came up with:  Preciosity and Nonplussed
  • ·         Also we ask the entry to include any of the mother words or close affiliates (mum, mommy, mama, madre, mami, ma or mom)

So, with all that, this starts our Author’s Challenge 29: Mom’s the word. Good luck to all!

*A Proviso...*


In Authors Challenge 27:Spring fling  Jim gave a rather special "prize" to future winners. The winner gets to choose two required words which have to appear somewhere in every entry.

On top of our two as of yet unknown required words, we shall also be required to place a Mother (mom, mummy, mama) type word within the entry. As the article/story will be about Mothers this should be quite do-able.

For a bit more ease for those of us who are long-winded, we decided to raise the word limit a tad to 600 words maximum.

So, two required words PreciosityNonplussed and the Mother word need to be within the 600 word max entry for qualification. Got it? Hope so.


The two required words for Author Challenge 29: Mom's the word are:

Preciosity and Nonplussed

About the all-important critique

We ask that each story receive gentle, informative and helpful critique.This is to make our experience at the Author Challenge a worthwhile endeavor. We should all learn something from this exercise, after all.

When all entries are in, please read each and post:

1- A positive comment. What did you especially like about this article or story?

2- A gentle critique. What didn't work in this story? What could have made it better? Could anything improve it? How would you have done it?

We ask that these be kept short, one or two sentences at most so no one gets over-tasked nor overwhelmed.

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And now, to keep the lawyers happy, the fine print...



photo by Southbanksteve

Here are the official rules of On-Board Author Challenges as developed during the previous 28 competitions, and modified once again for Challenge 29.

 

  • The official starting date for this challenge is May 16, 2011
  • Cut off for entries is June 1, 2011
  • These contests ARE NOT sponsored by, endorsed by, or guaranteed by Helium or any of its legal representatives
  • Rules of each competition are subject to change without prior notice, as deemed fit by your host, Jim Bessey. Any rule changes will be clearly posted on the challenge zone and on  Challenge 29 comment thread.
  • Contests are open to all Helium members. Member must have an open and active account at the time the contest is concluded, in order to win
  • Entry is made by posting a reply to the group forum thread for Challenge 29. All entries will be listed in Reply #2 to this thread plus on this zone.
  • One entry per contestant.
  • All articles written and submitted to the challenge must be an open HELIUM TITLE.
  • Entries must be posted at Helium.
  • Entries must be no more than 600 words.
  • Any TOS or User Agreement violations contained within an entered article may be grounds for disqualification.
  • Conditions for inclusion in a challenge may include the requirement to read and comment upon other authors' articles. Challenge 29 includes the following three special provisions:
  • JUDGING: Voting is as follows: each entrant has three votes for hand out. 1. The article and/or story  you like best for whatever reason (3points). 2. the article/story which best represents the Mother theme (2 points). 3. The best use of the required words ( 1 point).
  • The winner will be the one entry with the most accumulated votes.
  • PROMOTION: By participating, you agree to promote your chosen article/Story using some means of Social Networking. Emails, Facebook Posts, Tweets, Stumbles, etc are all acceptable choices for Promotion of entries.
  • PROMOTING THE WINNER: You also agree to promote the final Winner at least once, via some means of Social Networking.
  • Deadlines for entries  will be posted on the challenge zone and in the forum thread, first reply.
  • Decisions of the contest host are final. In the event of a tie, some  sort of Tie-Breaker will be created.
  • There are no Cash prizes. This is NOT an official Helium contest , and NO  EARNINGS ADJUSTMENTS be shown on the member's Earnings page. There is however a collection of prizes from which the winner will get to chose one.
  • The winner's article will be prominently featured on the Challenge Zone. 
  • These rules, and any changes to them, will be displayed in the first Post at the Authors Challenge Thread and on the matching Challenge Zone.
  • Additional information regarding this contest may be displayed in other areas of the thread or zone, and may also be supplied at a later time. Failure to modify these rules to include such additional information does not negate the inclusion of those conditions as part of the Challenge guidelines and rules.
  • Void where prohibited, cheaters will be publicly chastised, see Dealer for details, exclusions may apply, thank you for actually reading this far.

Comments (1 to 3 of 3)

Diane Quinn
May 17, 11 at 02:12 PM
Honesty at such a young age? The little guy in the video has potential! lol Great job, Glory.
Jim Bessey
today at 01:42 AM
Great job on this zone, Glory -- as always!
Gotta view the video now... :-)
R. Renee Bembry
yesterday at 11:03 PM
Hey Glory... You still refer to "scariest stories" in the Promotion section...

Other than that nice zone.

The "I don't like you Mommy" toddler video is a scream!

I don't like you Mommy

Kids say the funniest things. Watch as my 3 year old tells me what he thinks of me.

Entries for Challenge 29: Mom's the word

Singing to mama

Prizes? Yes, we've got some!


If you're thinking of entering this competition with $$$ in your eyes, fageddaboudit! There ain't none!

Okay so we won’t get money, but there is a prize!  The winner will even have a choice. Oh Joy!

Go see the prizes being offered for this and future  authors challenges.  

Well, you won’t get rich winning this contest, but all contestants will still have the thrill of an almost captive audience, some useful feedback on our work, and we also have the added bonus of having our article or story promoted for us  on FacebookTwitter, StumbleUpon and any other social media you prefer to use. You’ll also have the Glory of winning, plus you’ll receive loads of accolades from friend and foe alike!

Really, what more could you ask for?

Lookie here! Former Challenge Winners



Challenge 28: Sing us a song

Winner:  Flash fiction: The morgue by Alistair Marquise

Challenge 27: Spring fling

Winner: The Awakening by R. Renee Bembry

Challenge 26: Flash of winter

Winner: Going home by Petra Newman

Challenge 25: Home for the holidays

Winner: Short Story: Going home by Raymond Alexander Kukkee

Challenge 24: Annual Halloween Scary Stories


Winner: Reflections: Living in a haunted house by Revel Arroway

Challenge 23: Can you make the grade?


First place winner: Reflections: School by Raymond Alexander Kukee


Challenge 22: Pitch and Query

First Place winner: The Best decade to grow up in by Petra Newman

Second Place winner:  Burying the "N" word  by Ann Hinds

Challenge 21: Your best advice

First Place winner: How to recognize good writing advice by Glory Lennon

Challenge 20: Know Your Place

First Place winner:  Reflections : Smalltown Baseball by Ann Hinds

Challenge 19: Characters Welcome!

First Place winner:  Short Stories: Despair by Abagael MacAskill

Challenge 18: Leapin' Losers!

First place: Getting over writer's block by MJ Joanchim

Challenge 17: What about friends?

First place:   Essays: Friendship by Raymond Alexander Kukkee

Second place: Best ways to break up with a girlfriend by Jim Bessey

Challenge 16: Giving Thanks.

First place:   Thanksgiving Day: A reminder of why we are thankful by Olivia Bredbenner. 

Second place: Reflections: The art of giving thanks by Diane Quinn.

Challenge 15: All about Cats!

First place:  Memoirs: How my cat adopted me by Jim Bessey.

Second place tie: How big cat habitats are altered by people by MJ Joachim,

and  Memoirs: How cats guided me through life's journey by EJ Young.

Challenge 14: How to ___your own___.

First place:  How to propagate plants from cuttings by Glory Lennon.

Second place: How to develop your own writing style by Jim Bessey.

Mothers make for good inspiration

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